Hmmmmmm
No real story Only one fame try two next time! No movie
Hmmmmmm
No real story Only one fame try two next time! No movie
No, they were two frames. Three, if you count with layers.
Hmmmmmmmmm
Good try not bad but not good!
Animation 3/10 His head went up... then down
Story 4/10 went on for to long kind of funny...
sound 2/10 Hurt my ears the MD guy sounded like the caller lol
Music 2/10 Add some try this: http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/136013
Add a play button code:
on (release) {
gotoAndPlay("scene1");
}
Comments:
Use the same code for a replay button that should work. Get a new microphone
and add some of that stuff try adding a back ground. Ant WTF is up with the pizza.
Overall: 3/10
I am rating ten because:
Please leave it on Newgrounds.
I hate getting blamed i don't think this should get blamed so i will protect it i is not that good but...add what i said to a it can be better! Keep up the good work.
Mrbender
Well....
Might just be me but it was not that funny!
Music 3/10 - Music is important not to bad but not great!
Story 3/10 - Not funny
Sound 8/10 - Best part
Animation 5/10 - Crude but i have seen much worse!
Overall 5/10 - Good try!
I wish I had more time to work on the script, but I had a strict deadline. Had to get this done in 3 days. I added a joke here or there, but because it was an english project I tried to keep slightly serious
To slow!
Animation 3/10 - OK drawings but if went to slow!
Sound 6/10 - Hmmmmmmmmm
Story - WHAT!
Hmmmmmm....
Animation 8/10- Great the best part!
Sound 6/10- Not so crazy about the voice!
Music 8/10- It fit!
Story 5/10- Not that funny!
Overall 6.5/10- Great animation better then what i could do but work on the story! :D
Yeah that's why I'm looking for advice on buying a microphone, I basically had my computer on one side of the room while I was at the other just so it could pick up my voice without going to complete static lol But thanks, glad you like the work! :D
Nice
I like it very well done.
great
that was on my top ten flash films i almost cried it was very tastful and emotional
nice
nice
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