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Whistle Status: Normal
Exp. Points: 70 / 100
Exp. Rank #: 278,230
Voting Pow.: 3.11 votes
BBS Posts: 21 (0.02 per day)
Flash Reviews: 20
Music Reviews: 1
Trophies: 0
Stickers: 0
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20 Reviews | 5 w/ Responses
Nice but then it want on and on and on!
Author's Response:
You obviously don't have any christmas spirit.
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No real story Only one fame try two next time! No movie
Author's Response:
No, they were two frames. Three, if you count with layers.
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Good try not bad but not good!
Animation 3/10 His head went up... then down
Story 4/10 went on for to long kind of funny...
sound 2/10 Hurt my ears the MD guy sounded like the caller lol
Music 2/10 Add some try this: http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/136013
Add a play button code:
on (release) {
gotoAndPlay("scene1");
}
Comments:
Use the same code for a replay button that should work. Get a new microphone
and add some of that stuff try adding a back ground. Ant WTF is up with the pizza.
Overall: 3/10
I am rating ten because:
Please leave it on Newgrounds.
I hate getting blamed i don't think this should get blamed so i will protect it i is not that good but...add what i said to a it can be better! Keep up the good work.
Mrbender
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Sound 10/10 - Great sound effects!
Story 8/10 - Funny but short.
Music 3/10 - Music would have made it much better but it gets a 3 for not being bad!
Animation 7/10 I hate stick figures. :D
Extra points 3 - No Preloader but there was a replay button!
Overall 6/10 - Funny!
Author's Response:
Actually if u do that math that's 34/40 = 85% = 8.5/10 :D
lol thanks for the funny....
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Might just be me but it was not that funny!
Music 3/10 - Music is important not to bad but not great!
Story 3/10 - Not funny
Sound 8/10 - Best part
Animation 5/10 - Crude but i have seen much worse!
Overall 5/10 - Good try!
Author's Response:
I wish I had more time to work on the script, but I had a strict deadline. Had to get this done in 3 days. I added a joke here or there, but because it was an english project I tried to keep slightly serious
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Fun...but then gets boring!
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Fun...but then gets boring!
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Animation 3/10 - OK drawings but if went to slow!
Sound 6/10 - Hmmmmmmmmm
Story - WHAT!
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Animation 4/10- The best part
Sound 2/10 Just bad
Story 1/10 SPAM
Sorry
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Animation 8/10- Great the best part!
Sound 6/10- Not so crazy about the voice!
Music 8/10- It fit!
Story 5/10- Not that funny!
Overall 6.5/10- Great animation better then what i could do but work on the story! :D
Author's Response:
Yeah that's why I'm looking for advice on buying a microphone, I basically had my computer on one side of the room while I was at the other just so it could pick up my voice without going to complete static lol But thanks, glad you like the work! :D
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